As I whisper your name
the blend of colours
and tone bring your
your smile back home.
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Very sensitive and written with an understanding of what was and what is. Touching poem. DC
Beautiful Jon. It's like a celebration of what has been, not a lament for what is lost. N
This is another melancholy poem of a lost love, Jon, and it is also very well written and expressed, telling it's poignant tale exceptionally well from beginning to end. Carl.
memories of love that was...poignant composition...under the willow tree, the shared moments left print in your heart...10+++
A heart touching poem! The tree would be lucky to shade the pearl like this, that it companied the poetess in her happiness and agonies of solitude. I would like to add this lovely poem in my favorate poem list