Tuesday, May 5, 2009

Missing You Comments

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I miss you so its like my heart has been extracted, my soul subtracted
I'm lost without you, but mostly I'm lonely without you
Its a strange and quiet place now, my place
What's worse is that I know you miss me too
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Amelie peace 19 May 2009

wow...that's amazing! kinda...eerie...heart felt. Fantastic work!

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Dr.subhendu Kar 12 May 2009

love riffles when shadowed heart respires slow by the rhythm, .yet most passionate and poignant by the alienation, yet ingenious by imagery, well penned,10+++

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