Monday, January 12, 2009

Missing You Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lost within my words, remembering why you left.
Rage burns in my heart for reasons I cannot confess.
Thoughts in my head circulating for answers.
Pain becoming stronger, spreading deep in my soul, like cancer.
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John Smith 18 January 2009

I am blown away by your amazing writing. So deep, meaningful and passionate. Heart wrenching but equally beautiful. Easily a 10

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Keith Hendrickson 13 January 2009

wow you are such a passionate writer. filled feelings straight from your heart. nice piece.

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Catrina Heart 12 January 2009

Don’t make me let go, for I refuse to. Seeing you in pain, for I didn’t mean to. For I will give you my love with this heart of mine. NO! No more lies, with out you I’m not doing fine. The want for you. (So strong) The need for me, is it so wrong? Missing you. (Missing You! !) Are you? Yes i do........Wow! ! ! what a heartfelt composition, so full of love and passion....you have penned it so strong and with full of emotions...10+++

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