Saturday, August 29, 2015

Missing Wings (2015) Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm suffocating without you.
I'm paralyzed and your love is the very nerve that kept me going.
I miss you.
I rather die fighting for you than to watch the regret cover the atmosphere so my compassion will be unnoticed.
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M.W. Styner
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David Wood 29 August 2015

There's nothing so painful than saying goodbye to a love. I feel this in your poem. Good piece of work. Have a read of my 'Should I Die Tomorrow.'

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Milton Styner Jr 15 September 2015

Thanks I truly appreciate it

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