Missing Someone Comments

WHY THE DID I TYPE ELSIE IN MY FIRST (?) POEM COMMENT TO YOU? ! ;) BRI have a nice day. say Hello to the worms and butterflies.........and bees for me!

Very nice....disturbs us with that profound question of the unexplored possibilities.... :)

Another great poem, Lora. The mystery of life! Reminds me of a story my dad told me of two ships passing in the night. Sadly it's a question many ask themselves, I certainly have. What if? Enjoyed reading this, Lora. Good work.

make that MyPoetList. and MyPoemList as well.

Lovely write, mysterious and haunting. Would be good reading with a margarita.

An intriguing poem Lora. Written well with a nice rhythm to it.

Now my hair is gray, my looks are gone, Through crowded streets I walk alone. Remembering my youth, my thoughts take flight Who am I missing tonight? Heart touching words! In our life's journey, we happen to love someone so profoundly but, so silently, that our love goes unnoticed. Yet at ripe age, our minds perhaps do not regret much, though our thoughts take flight, and remember the person we so profoundly miss, as s/he leave a permanent impression in our minds. Lady, I loved your poem and thank you very much for this excellent piece.

love this poem Lora. brings back thoughts of yesterday. nice ink

Of cours he's missing you too. He'd be a fool not to.