Monday, August 15, 2011

Missing, Presumed Lost Comments

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Not for you, those cold clothes
woven of worry and made ragged with regret.
You lived your final hours fearlessly, as if becalmed,
with a whole life yet to fetch that other shore.
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Sailing to windward
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Thomas Vaughan Jones 22 January 2014

Not a rhyme in sight yet the imagery is beautiful. Crystal clear. You slipped away as gracefully as you lived, with sails full and love bubbling in your wake. We are bereft, and, while you have started a new journey, it is us, not you, who are left all at sea. Classical lines. Well written

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Romeo Della Valle 26 August 2011

A very impressive write that is well penned and poignant! I love its imagery and smooth and find texture! Keep inspiring the World with your well talented poems! 10+++ If time permits, please, read and I hope you enjoy my poem titled: THERE ARE MOMENTS... Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York! ...

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Eric Cockrell 15 August 2011

every moment is our last moment... so few take the time to really live... a very good poem!

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