Missing Pieces Comments

Asif The missing pieces of a jigsaw is an excellent title and theme. As the poem was fairly short and the imagery wonderful, I found it had a direct impact on me. Well done! Karin Anderson

dreams are wondering in foggy mist trying and searching for love filled bliss .......wonderful lines! ! ! I really love it!

'life is shatered like broken glass memories are mingled like jigsaw puzzel thoughts are in the search of missing pieces ' I particularly liked this last stanza beautiful as alwys the enigmatic Asif +++++++++10 anjali

We always try, the missing piece of life, And try to find the way to go out, This poem is so great, something like I try to find now... I trying to find the 'Missing Piece' Woww, , the great one, , Love it so much... Naru Kaede,

An enigmatic write of tangled feelings and random emotions!

Yes... Wonderful first stanza... A great poem worthy of 10.. quality

A well written poem my favorite is the 1st stanza. Great JOB

I like your works because of simplicity and purity of your mind and style... I can relate many things to myself, still you are much beyond that I could compare myself with you... Great write indeed... so simple, deep and really touches the heart and soul of a reader... Always keep that purity alive my brother... Thanks for sharing this lovely piece with me... Regrads, Kamran

dreams are wondering in foggy mist trying and searching for love filled bliss, we all searching of it, hope you find yours, very lovely poem touch my heart

'Thoughts are in search of missing pieces' Wow Bhayya. beautiful inddeeeed.10

Life shattered.........scrambled into millions pieces.........rejuvenating the soul seems impossible.Nice piece Asif.

this is a very cool poem. dreams are wondering in foggy mist good lines for your reader to get a image. written well. good job. Becca

a philosophical write...reads good, Aijaz...thanks for sharing...10