Friday, July 29, 2016

Missing Part Comments

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Its only days now to the big day, Santa coming soon.
Christmas is at our doorstep and I should be over the moon.
My family is not complete were missing one of our parts
It feels like some one has reached in and stolen a piece of my heart.
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Philip Mc Mahon
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Hazel Durham 10 September 2016

Love the title and a beautiful heartfelt write, with great rhythm and rhyming, thank you for sharing!

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Annette Aitken 29 July 2016

Thats a lovely heart felt piece, as you know we have to let them go so they will return again a fuller person. So happy your family in all back in the same country. Annette

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