Friday, November 2, 2007

Missing My Soul Comments

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In Despair of Loss,
Great surprise found me happiness
An absent father figure lend a hand,
Time proved restrictive conditional stand.
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Blue Angel
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Tarapada Mohapatra 04 November 2007

In order to be free, I must reencounter unconditional love. I loved it Please read my poems and advise

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Another very deep and well thought piece... Loss of any kind pushes one to the corner of despair and numbness. Hope, faith and love lit a candle in the dark. I like the last stanza - it ends the whole with optimism. Great write :)

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