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wow what a sweet poem is this one.. candle with out fire.. well done and you presented cause and effects as two opposte variables which is making your poems great and the idea is enough rich and thoughful and meaningful..well done, and appreciated..you are doing a good job..10/10

Some very intense imagery, and original lines strung together to make the perfect poetic origami. I'd suggest you fix up the meter in the several places it's off, as well as the several spelling mistakes just to polish this poem to perfection. Good stuff, I liked it.

Well written! ! The Lord is or missing link to eternal happiness. Well thought out! !