Missing Element Comments

yes, hugh, i feel this poem goes well with my 'wake-up call'...and it is a very fine poem in itself. thanks! u.

This poem was inspired by a comment I made to a poem by Ulrike Gerbig. Her poem and my comment worked together in some mysterious way to inspire and produce this poem. Thanks to Ulrike and to my muse. Hugh

My eyes blurry after I read this poem, and in my attempt to write my comments. When a person is missing an essential part to their life or being...imagination saves the day, but never can it save the moment of realization....which hurts the most. Exceptional poem Hugh. Angie

Hugh, I can relate to this! Experiencing that rejection and awakening to discover a loss that wass not there...OR was it? I like 'Missing Element' L