Monday, September 29, 2008

Missing Dad Comments

Rating: 3.1

A man must labor all his life
But what makes him a success
Is how he lived while he was here
That seperates him from the rest
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Kathleen West
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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 29 September 2008

He's reliving in you, my dear poet, and would be proud of you.

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Marilyn Lott 29 September 2008

This poem is written so beautifully, Kathleen, for your father. It reminds me of my poem A Common Man for that is the kind of man who is so special. I love your rhyming style and your father would be so proud of you and your tribute to him! A '10! ' indeed. Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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