Friday, July 31, 2009

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A brush without the paint
The sky without the stars
A tortured soul, missing needless scars
These are things that should always be
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tara fortier
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Afzal Shauq 06 August 2009

A prison missing bars A highway losing cars These are things that should always be. Yet they are nowhere to be found. Like a lock without a key. And a drum without the sound reality seems your base of poetry..thats why I am enjoying it and this poem has the same meaningful and interesting effects.. I really like it much..well done

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