Thursday, November 29, 2007

Missing Comments

Rating: 4.7

A missing part that,
doesn't want to be found.
A part that just wants to hide and cry,
the part that is most important in our lives.
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Aisha Love
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Sensei Faith 05 March 2014

Wow! ! ! Amazing lines..loved it :) check my poems if you wish

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Khairul Ahsan 02 February 2014

You have nicely portrayed a broken heart here. Well done! 'The soul wants it back but it refuses to come.' - And 'My soul is aching without this missing piece my soul is missing its heart.' - These lines truly depict a soul with a broken heart.

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Roger Cornish 29 November 2007

Very....Very Nice! Good work Aisha..... Roger.

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