…………………………………missed You Comments

very effective imagery reflect that feeling of missing for aborted loving fetus, ....10++++missed you in pauses when foetus of thought aborted and word went down the drain and could not lodge itself in loft of your ear our warmth of your heart I missed you when eye encountered sun of circumstances sight blinded I groped for your hand and found mine with maps of world drawn upside down

Foetus of thought being aborted, is bad, very bad and yet it was just a thought. You'll certainly give birth to many more, A beautiful poem, greetings!

what wonderful imagery from nature have you conjured up to convey the intensity!

Reaching a self centered person is really tough.

Missing you sad poem. With amazing imageries. With bleeding emotions. 10+++