Saturday, September 5, 2009

Missed Opportunity Comments

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Cool air and a ripe apple lie forgotten
on the bed of summer.
A chestnut orb, prickly piece of
sabotage, finds my step as I transverse
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mimi brown
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Paul Cutting 13 September 2009

Outstanding, you knocked me off my feet. now a new fan is borne to you PC

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Ian Bowen 11 September 2009

Mimi, most probably too good for this site. Try writing in broken English and add a few spelling mistakes...you will rise up the charts like a rat up a drainpipe. Enjoyed your poem. Regards, Ian

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