Wednesday, September 28, 2011

Missed Opportunities Comments

Rating: 4.8

I was told that
That there was a beautiful sunset
Last evening,
That lit the sky
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Mary Pagdati 29 September 2012

Lovely poem... straight to the heart.

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Allemagne Roßmann 02 October 2011

Sadly it tells of the opportunities being taken before but what proved enjoyments way to be futile and added the feeling that change management thought to be so optimal could only be assumed hypothetically but the natural way of its realisation could be ignored in some of its later undercurrent.But it adds however it counts large on individual or remain just as an opportunity that came and swept the way without unfolding something life had its unflinching faith in now yet be forgotten...Atonement of poetry as your new dimension.Great write..

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Eric Cockrell 28 September 2011

so much beauty, so much intensity... we miss by not being aware! great poem!

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