Wednesday, October 2, 2013

Miss You Xx Comments

Rating: 4.5

When we are together
Constantly we fight
When we are apart
World seems depressed
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Ruby Mostazir
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me poet yeps poet 17 May 2021

TRY AND MIX UR XY with her xx u may then succeed to seed

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Chinedu Dike 25 November 2020

A concise and poignant bit of verse, very heartfelt with strong emotions. A beautiful creation.

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Aarzoo Mehek 25 June 2020

Sweet and sour anecdotes sums up a relationship.

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 06 September 2018

good writings......................................

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Akhtar Jawad 08 June 2018

Love is an state of helplessness, when we have no alternate but to live together, it's love.

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Mahtab Bangalee 05 June 2018

O no, not I am aware of you or mine In time I live out of line Love goes away on the wave of saline at last - nothing I find have to live me out of mine greatly written 10++

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Muzahidul Reza 09 November 2017

World seems depressed Like a dark gloomy night.... wonderfully penned in true emotion,10

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Rajnish Manga 08 August 2017

Relationships, apart from love, require mutual respect and understanding for each other. Moreover, we take things for granted. This brings turmoil in our otherwise peaceful life. Thanks a lot for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 February 2017

love and its feelings well portrayed in such small verses. thank you dear poetess.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 March 2015

Very nicely and aptly envisioned which deeply expresses the love between two. Many thanks for sharing.

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Jahooru Islam 28 March 2015

So say in your heart, Love is completely here, nothing in this entire experience is outside of Love.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 13 July 2014

good feel..good bonding melted with love and love mingle with life...............

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 05 July 2014

heart touching true...thanks Love can't be defined...varies as it vary with age

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Heather Wilkins 14 December 2013

sometimes love is like being in a boxing ring. a truth spoken

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Khairul Ahsan 09 December 2013

So wonderful! Truth told in simple words.10/10 from me.

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Paul Brookes 09 December 2013

Can't live with them can't live without them the human dilemma Nice write BB: O))

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Kanav Justa 09 November 2013

.. lovely write.... wonderful

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 01 November 2013

Oh i can relate to dis nice fine short n sweet poem of lovelife! Pls do coment my latest poem. Fond regards.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 05 October 2013

heart touch a poem with truth/ mirth in life 10

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