When we are together
Constantly we fight
When we are apart
World seems depressed
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A concise and poignant bit of verse, very heartfelt with strong emotions. A beautiful creation.
Love is an state of helplessness, when we have no alternate but to live together, it's love.
O no, not I am aware of you or mine In time I live out of line Love goes away on the wave of saline at last - nothing I find have to live me out of mine greatly written 10++
World seems depressed Like a dark gloomy night.... wonderfully penned in true emotion,10
Relationships, apart from love, require mutual respect and understanding for each other. Moreover, we take things for granted. This brings turmoil in our otherwise peaceful life. Thanks a lot for sharing.
love and its feelings well portrayed in such small verses. thank you dear poetess.
Very nicely and aptly envisioned which deeply expresses the love between two. Many thanks for sharing.
So say in your heart, Love is completely here, nothing in this entire experience is outside of Love.
good feel..good bonding melted with love and love mingle with life...............
heart touching true...thanks Love can't be defined...varies as it vary with age
sometimes love is like being in a boxing ring. a truth spoken
Can't live with them can't live without them the human dilemma Nice write BB: O))
Oh i can relate to dis nice fine short n sweet poem of lovelife! Pls do coment my latest poem. Fond regards.
TRY AND MIX UR XY with her xx u may then succeed to seed