Today I gave you roses
I gave you thirty three,
one red rose for every year
that you shared with me.
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Hi Asal, So painful is separation. The pain in the poem touches the hearts of the reader. Great write.
Hi. I just read your poem and it's really nice. May God give comfort to his soul (If the adressee is dead of course) ad patience to thee... Anyway - Nice piece of poetry, I would say You're really talented. Good Luck dear.
beautiful love poem.the flow, rhyme are perfect and it touches the heart.nice work asal.
Well expressed thoughts and feelings, very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing. Asal.