Miss You (Revised) Comments

Structured with intense longings that leap into the lane loveliness.

nice writing....i suppozed it iz a dedication....keep it up

Thank you dear Utsav Patel for yr wonderful comment, by mistake yr comment on this read has been deleted.

Queeny, I am confused who you are referring to! Is it about your earthly Mother or your Heavenly Mother Mary who is the embodiment of patience and endurance and a link between God and man? Any way a lovely poem! Enjoyed!

Someone who has all the characteristics we cherish is God. We then express our adoration to Him. Beautifully expressed in the poem. Thank you.

.. a lovely poem.... read it many times...

If it were I, I would stand confounded on the track of these strange experiences you share Queeny. A blend of what is earthly and what is that is diametrically polar, the theme of the poem evades my comprehension. Anyways, you have rendered your feelings well and used the canvas of poetry for portraying these sketches of feelings so brilliantly. A good write Queeny..

Delightful....your words could have applied to a lover, Jesus, or in this case, a mother.

A delightful poem expressing genuine love for the Lord of love.

A lovely and beautiful tribute with prayer.