Miss You Comments

Nice wording I liked the way you express this poem it's different from the others great job

I. the feeling of love and the pride captured in the your shine as a spark / star....I loved Glowing I grow..... 2. reality's twisted path and lonliness' wrath..... then the masterstroke........held togather in pieces by fragments of rhyme.... so much symbolic of hope and dream that are held in our minds and hearts despite the known reality...... 3.Finding you...........and without you, these two phrases have really made the poem take a sharp turn, showing your finesse and wordly strength as a poet...good words and flow here, I liked praying in honoring and loyal ways.... 4. outside colorful and inside sad and blue..... wow....strong and courageous, reaching for light...figthing with demons and monsters along the way.... 5. battling emotions and at war with own thoughts....dissolving, ignoring, forgetting the past...a bit by bit and then the whole lot..... Your capability of diving deep into a situation and ocean of emotions is unique..... keep up the good work