Thursday, March 16, 2017

Miss Little Lucy Lollipop Comments

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Little Lucy Lollipop
On one foot, she liked to hop.
The whole darn day ,
She'd hop that way!
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Elisabeth Wingle
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Bri Edwards 31 July 2017

hi Lisa, now i shall use this juicy tidbit in August showcase. Thanks. and it is not JUST you i've been ignoring on PH! ! ! soon i plan to spend a lot more time reading new-to-me PH poems by PH friends and others, ..........until it is time again for me to put together a showcase. i may scale it downward or break the showcase into pieces so people are NOT faced with such a huge production when (IF) they ever look at one of the showcases. ha ha! Thanks and best wishes (as 'they' say) . bri :)

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Bri Edwards 19 June 2017

i STILL LIKE IT! ! ! any particular children you are writing for? bri :)

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Bri Edwards 20 March 2017

i like the title and the poem. a lively twosome: Lucy and the poem. to MyPoemList. Lucy's Time To Rest After, all day, hopping on her right, Lucy hopped on her left all night! But then she had to take a rest; with only two feet she was blest. bri :)

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