I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song
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Forced rhymes. Nonsense. Those who praise this are insincere or stupid.
Is it blessings to you or gift from Lord? Blessings are gift from the Lord, I reckon.5 Stars Full, Sir! I have enjoyed very much.
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine. Lines full of humor in almost all lines, superbly written!
Baloney, Sylvia. Anyone who would praise this crap is either insincere or stupid.
am so much influenced by lady smile She has entered in life just before while' Life seems to be so interesting and fine I want to dance on floor with glass of wine
Life will be full of remorse but still I would forgo....practical. A great write sir...5 stars
Dillip, anyone who would praise this crap is either insincere or stupid.
It may be her way of thinking It left me high and dry with blinking What should I call her sacrifice? A step of dedication or break of promises? nice poem!
Poem: 16893249 - Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ### Member: Ogbajie Daniel Comment: Really nice sir Love the rhymes
Poem: 16893249 - Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ### Member: Suresh Kumar Comment: classical sir, Admirations
Did u know Magdaha Rani is Dillip Swain. He has manipulated the site to make Rani with 13 poems fourth in popularity. All he does is moan about others. He should be kicked off the site.
nice lines... You also can read my poem Zindagi- Ek Paheli Thanks
Nice ballad. Thanks for sharing such lovely work. Thus a bit long. Cheers
Miss' I miss you but you don't miss, Did not expect from you kind hug or simple kiss Not even kind gesture or more of any show Still I miss you and never beat eye brow....outstanding conceptualization. A great poem is amazingly shared. Thank you dear sir for sharing this beautiful poem with us.
Very wonderful poem.Its a sort of sarcastic love poem.You are blaming her but not blaming her also. The deep impact of thoughts with real emotions have been captured in this poem.Thank for sharing the poem with us.
Lots of passion.