Saturday, October 31, 2015

Miss Hanaley Comments

Rating: 4.5

Miss Hanley
I plainly see
That you are rather grand
And if I may
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Terry Dawson
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Poppy Miller 17 January 2016

The rhyming of this verse makes it easy to conjure up a picture of the lovely Miss Hanley being taken by the hand by your good self onto the dancing floor. Delicate images here that would please any female reader. Loved it Terry.

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Folorunso Oladipo Daniel 26 December 2015

.... the second to the last line I cherished most... good work.. you can also read poem; 'An Entrapment'

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Sally Plumb Plumb 14 November 2015

Enjoyable swing to this piece.

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Terry Dawson

Terry Dawson

Harare, Zimbabwe.
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