Whiter than white,
Purer than snow.
A virginal saint.
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Another beautifully macabre piece! I love how you linked this poem to Enchantress via the aiding cop. A superb write, lovely and intricate with its macabre details.
Bryony any comment from your good self I treasure more than gold. Your poems Bryony, your incredible poems I love to read for they are so original and just flow wonderfully. Please don't stop writing. Thanks for your kind and gracious comment. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much. Take care.
Excellent write! An amazing poem that grips the reader from the title to the last line. As if I am watching a detective story. Very captivating lines with superb imagery. The penultimate and ultimate stanzas are indeed great twists to the story. A great poem so beautifully crafted and well executed. Onto my Poem List.
Thank you Rose Marie. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I simply wanted as you a spotted something with a double twist. It starts off nicey, nicey turns darker with one payoff, then hit the reader quickly with the other. I thank you Rose Marie for your poems. Just The Wink Of An Eye and Absolute Power spellbinding classics. I thank you again.
She Was There kicks off The Trilogy Of Evil Poems... Miss Goody Two Shoes is Trilogy Of Evil Part 2 Enchantress is Trilogy Of Evil Part 3 And I'm thinking of putting up The Lady Killer hinted at the beginning of Enchantress. And Maybe a combined Miss Goody Two Shoes and The Lady Killer where they team up. Again hinted at the start of Enchantress. When I have time I'll put up the FULL version of It Knows What Scares You, that has everything in it and the kitchen sink.