Friday, June 15, 2012

Miss Content And The Waterfall Comments

Rating: 4.5

A thousand dreams and aspirations dance mischievously
As pink confetti
Upon smiling breeze
Flowing free fall worlds, where children dance barefoot within tinkering
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karen sinclair
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Mark Dillon 21 August 2012

really nice Karen, it's nice to get into the zone now and then, a happy place to just, be

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Eiz Qarqash 16 June 2012

If I'm the one who wrote this poem, I'd call it my masterpiece! ! ! ! ! What an outstanding poem! ! !

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Saadat Tahir 16 June 2012

to me sounds like a very nice depiction of montage. dreamy and swirling like confetti... gels to a neat ending.... liked it cheers

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Dr.subhendu Kar 15 June 2012

Midnight waves doth stroke her shore And Her woe's and tears Are left Once more........................... moments respire in midnight waves and the shrill cry of joy flows beyond tide relishes to kiss sands onshore heart glimmers embracing springs of blossom, beautiful write by imagery and metaphors,10+++, thanks for sharing

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