A thousand dreams and aspirations dance mischievously
As pink confetti
Upon smiling breeze
Flowing free fall worlds, where children dance barefoot within tinkering
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If I'm the one who wrote this poem, I'd call it my masterpiece! ! ! ! ! What an outstanding poem! ! !
to me sounds like a very nice depiction of montage. dreamy and swirling like confetti... gels to a neat ending.... liked it cheers
Midnight waves doth stroke her shore And Her woe's and tears Are left Once more........................... moments respire in midnight waves and the shrill cry of joy flows beyond tide relishes to kiss sands onshore heart glimmers embracing springs of blossom, beautiful write by imagery and metaphors,10+++, thanks for sharing
really nice Karen, it's nice to get into the zone now and then, a happy place to just, be