Miss Blue, look at you…
Sitting there looking out into the blue of night.
Out that window with that blank blue stare.
Pensive, it’s written on your face.
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In a world full of cold and hurt. Have you lost your way? A question quiet universal to all the sensitive being who are yet alive on the surface. You, poet, also one of them. Good writing. Soft and touchy lines are much penetrative to the heart. Write more....... Regards, pranab 10
Many of your lines sound like old song titles and lyrics mixed together. It's kind of like a patchwork poem. A poet friend..RH Peat
we all make mistakes in life. good read