Thursday, November 25, 2010

Miss Blue Comments

Rating: 5.0

Miss Blue, look at you…
Sitting there looking out into the blue of night.
Out that window with that blank blue stare.
Pensive, it’s written on your face.
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Kevin Carney
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Heather Wilkins 23 June 2013

we all make mistakes in life. good read

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Pranab K Chakraborty 01 December 2010

In a world full of cold and hurt. Have you lost your way? A question quiet universal to all the sensitive being who are yet alive on the surface. You, poet, also one of them. Good writing. Soft and touchy lines are much penetrative to the heart. Write more....... Regards, pranab 10

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R. H. Peat 27 November 2010

Many of your lines sound like old song titles and lyrics mixed together. It's kind of like a patchwork poem. A poet friend..RH Peat

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