Saturday, May 28, 2005

Misogyny Comments

Rating: 3.1

Women walking in the park
'neath branches drenched in light
summer dresses, low cut tops
and smiles that invite
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James Atkins
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Anna Russell 06 April 2006

Great meter perfectly balances the slight sense of discomfort the reader feels. Very good write, well done. Hugs Anna xxx

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Ernestine Northover 19 October 2005

Yep! Another nice one. Sincerely Ernestine Northover

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Sallie Howson 06 June 2005

i love the rhythm of this poem

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