Misogamy Comments

A lucid and cogent write….one is tempered by ones life experiences. On purely poetic merit your lines are well conceived and well written….they flow easy upon the tongue and there is a bit of chafing in a place or two….though hardly noticeable, does not digress from the over all beauty of the poem. Contextually one may tend to differ yet it is so contemporary and factual that the word cliché comes to mind. Modern life styles and the attendant time constraints are part to blame, but it is a complex and testing issue. I loved reading yer poem….it does force one to think and head scratch ones head. I too wrote on the issue from a slightly different slant, you m ay like to read “Marry nay merry” Blessings sat

wow...i like, smooth flow.

With loving eyes He doth see lovers entwined in holy matrimony you make love you worship