Misleading Light Poem by Varsha M

Misleading Light

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Jealousy is pernecious
Haul to oubliette infectious
Till becomes insidious
Kill conscientiousness
For donkey's years.

Misleading Light
Friday, June 5, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: darkness,jealousy,misanthropy,misery
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Path of jealousy is pernecious
Hauling into dungeon infectious
Until it becomes insidious
Killing conscitiousness
For donkey's years.
Are the original composition in response to Dilip sir's poem spouses.
Reorganized trying for 31syllables but managed 32 syllables.
Photo by Sven Brandsma on unsplash.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 27 September 2020

Jealousy! ! ! Muse of a wicked heart! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 August 2020

Till becomes insidious Kill conscientiousness For donkey's years. hard words to portray a bad feeling. tony

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