Sunday, April 26, 2009

Misguided Missile.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

It is dangerous..
N lethal...
It can cause mayhem
N destruction...
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shweta advani
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Audrey Heller 18 May 2009

Thank you, for your critique! I just read yours and it's also, unique! As you said, it's very much like mine and both of us had, the same thought, in mind!

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the missile used well..it is a missile from within...lovely piece

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Kesav Easwaran 05 May 2009

good piece...inspirational message inside...you use the words like well guided missiles through out your write...10

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Runita Menezes 26 April 2009

Excellent write. Keep up the good work.

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