Misfortune Comments
The day a lightning struck my home in September 2010
I read in it signs of bad time grave misfortune’s ill omen
Early morn it fell the night though didn’t hint of a bad weather
Jolting us further a bereaved family my father had died that year.
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How you have threaded these sequence of events into a beautiful poem. I believe it is half fiction and half truth! Nevertheless a splendid write! !
Always a miracle after a misfortune. I hope you have many great memories of your father.
A good poetry with very sentimental expressions... It's great..keep it up...
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8/29/2025 12:11:17 PM # 1.0.0
You are a great storyteller. Next time, I will have the popcorn ready. But I'm glad no one was hurt by the lightning.