Life will be pretty dull if nothing goes astray
What would be the weather if skies were never gray
Some setbacks are needed to spice up boring days
And not take for granted when cheer is holding sway
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When bad luck encountered just shrug and move along On a silver platter only a few belonged....................... ..................may i suggest: (ok, i shall) .....is in front of encountered, and belong instead of belonged. :) is that a new photo of you, young man? who will be laughing in December? [post-u.s.-election] a fine addition for MyPoemList. i always appreciate good rhyming. thanks. and some wise advice, though going astray could be fatal or crippling for some people/countries! now i won't be able to sleep tonight...........more than ten hours. bri :)
part of Kelly Kurt's comment: Kelly Kurt (7/17/2016 12: 08: 00 PM) This kind of wisdom tends to only come with age. what i'd like to know is: when do i get MINE? ? wisdom that is. i have quite a bit of age already. bri :)
Bro, is that YOU in the red tie. i'd vote for ya..............NOT! i like the poem. i guess i'll let can stand. it adds emphasis to what you are saying. otherwise, fine job on rhyming; well, good enough! ! bri :)
Yes, the simple basic things in life, and you paint them beautifully
Fantastic...... I love the message the poem conveys! Yes, through setbacks we become stronger! ! A sure 10
This kind of wisdom tends to only come with age. I preach perspective almost every day. I should just show people this poem instead!
Then bravely you can face whatever rounds the bend............maybe face it, but not necessarily overcome/defeat/avoid it. : ( AND NOW WE KNOW! TRUMP, 'MR. PRESIDENT' did WIN! ! ! ! WE shall see what transpires over his term in office. bri :) shall i use this or another in Feb. or March showcase? ?