Friday, January 17, 2014

Misfit Right In Comments

Rating: 5.0

Where to begin, Misfit-Right In
Do your colorful shoelaces
match your lip gloss grin
Does that hat that you're sportin'
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Susan Lacovara
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Abigail Martin 31 January 2014

Wow! I'm really glad you recommended your poem to me. I love it! I believe that if you aren't being yourself then all you are doing is lying to yourself and everybody around you.

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Jon M. Nelson 26 January 2014

Great use of the rhyming scheme. This had a good flow, and an intelegent thought behind it. Very nicely done.

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Debanjan Dhar 20 January 2014

very intelligent wordplay

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Kanav Justa 18 January 2014

, , loverly write, , , , wonderful message, ,

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Gajanan Mishra 17 January 2014

I like this writing, thanks.

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Susan Lacovara

Susan Lacovara

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