Tuesday, November 26, 2019

Misfit Comments

Rating: 5.0

My hair's too long
My skirt's too short
My thoughts are wrong
My rights aren't fought
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Bryony Sheldon
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 09 December 2019

Woah hard hitting strong words poem and I like the vivid imagism of phrasing you express and depict with. Kudos. Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too, titled, 'bullfighters: the bull bullies'

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Shaun Cronick 26 November 2019

Nicely done, well written with a great rhythm, flow and beat to it. And one to make any reader think about it's haunting message. Thank you Bryony for writing and sharing this.10++ and added to my favourites. Thanks again and take care.

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