Wednesday, July 4, 2007

Miserywhen Has This Come To Be Comments

Rating: 4.8

I woke up and it was three,
I got up just to see,
Another kid doing drugs,
Rapists pushing their luck..
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the poet
COMMENTS
Steve Chering 15 July 2007

Well done great effort. I think it would look much more impressive if it did not ryhme. but thats only my opinion. good job.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 04 July 2007

Welcome to modern life, makes life Better they say, don`t make me laugh we say...10

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Raveendran . 04 July 2007

Very well written('Peace comes when the division ends' -JK)

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