I lay awake at night trying to avoid sleep,
Terrified of the nightmares that invade my dreams.
Horrible pictures is steady replaying in my thoughts,
Making me to afraid to even close my eyes.
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I'm feeling blue this night, , No, I cannot read this poem twice; ; ; But this poem, you penned it well! ! ! !
Craig, i have to say my eyes flowing black tears for this write...This is the darkest story i ever read in PH, i know it nothing can heal you all of sudden from this bitter experience, it will always be a big scar and scary to look upon it.. I really anger toward the end of your last line..Maybe the poetry can make you relieve a lil for a while, release all pains but i know it wont rid them all out..Nice write, this is honest write i can feel, i think it's true..Craig, move to the best the part of life. Next we must stand when we need to act..Never let the animality evolve in human race..You will be a leader to vomit the strength and wash the lies...Keep it up my friend, nice poem you done it great_Unwritten Soul
Much graphics, but there is something still missing, something to turn it from misery into a classic
I hear your cry.....heartfelt write...strong emotion can be released and somewhat lessened by poetry...good write...made me sad....but it was meant to...well done. -SG
I'm glad that everybody likes and was moved by my poem but just to let you know the poem is based on fictional characters. It isn't about me or anyone I know but it is about all of the other kids out there that has been abused and molested