Misery Comments

A very well penned poem Chris, the young take life to seriously

Hi -well done with this one lots of young people end their lives if only they could write a message like this one, regards Ken e Hall

I feel this poem has a lot of power in it. It is very hard to write a poem that stirs up such great angst in the reader but you did it perfectly. Well done.

Someone help, mercy me. Take away my agony. Cleaning up this tragedy. Save me from, misery. We all got a part of us that need to be saved VERY GOOD i LOVED IT

Utmost despair speaking out of this poem.

Hey. The appeal you end with, for someone else to save you is really well written. Remember the strength you have within yourself, though.

'Take my own life end it all.' well, please remember that taking your life is a permanent solution to a temporary problem...We've all had problems at your age. We all feel pain...No one is exempt...but as you become older, you will learn the 'tools' you need within yourself to weather life's difficulties. I agree with Linda Farr, life is about change, situations and feelings....a never ending journey. Be well Chris.

You are an expressive writer, Misery is not a good feeling, although we go through bad times, we must always choose Life. Our whole life is about change, situations, feelings and so on.

Yes, more than 10 for you. I like short pems with deep meaning. Long poems are very narrative.Poetry is not essay or report.

Great poem. Showing how a brief of words can show endless possibility of deep emotions

this is a really good poem and i like how it expresses how you might have felt

Wow... u were right i do like that... thats how i felt the other week... weird

this perfectly describes some of the moments ive had in my life...nice write