Saturday, April 7, 2007

Misery Comments

Rating: 5.0

Misery brought on by my father’s neglectful ways,
Disrespect to him will shorten my days.
I find love within drugs,
Rather than fathers hugs.
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eboni paul
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Greenwolfe 1962 17 February 2008

I just read two or three of your poems and the tears fall like rain. I understand, to some extent we all do. You are not alone. Poetry can save lives or at least make them longer. I had to wait more than thirty years for the 'gift' to arrive. Stay around, and see what happens. GW62

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Marta Xoxx 08 October 2007

Awsome. The thing that I love about your poetry is that you have been through so much in life, but yet you still go on. It's amazing how you can put all your thoughts and emotions into your poems.

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Chelsi Ruffing 24 April 2007

You are so real when it comes to your poems and thats great. I know how you feel. I wish things get better for you. It's good that your not giving up.

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Arie Mack 09 April 2007

Eboni, You have been through alot and I really like this poem the most because it shows who U are and what u are going through. And also that you really do what you need to do so u can live from day to day.

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