Miserable Thoughts Comments
I was hit by something strong
Which made me to stumble on the ground
Entered my heart like piercing blade
Tearing away hopes thus made of thread
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A very well written poem................... Love & hugs............
Aijaz u have he uncanny ability to stir the sensitivity of the reader with your poems lofty with love, pain and myriad emotions......i am really moved by your writings!
It was breathing steadily with few Breaths of life bravo beautiful imagery
broken thoughts.... can be mended, all you need is determination. i can relate to your poems. it reflects my ideas when i was your age and was frustrated. keep on writing.
This gives a real picture of what our thoughts can do...thank you
Very strong use of metaphor. Wonderful imagery. You have turned your sad thoughts into a work of art.10 without hesitation. Warm regards, Sandra
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8/7/2025 9:26:46 AM # 1.0.0
Tearing away hopes thus made of thread Hushed the howling soul and great lines... good images for ur reader. I liked this a lot. good job. Becca