Monday, October 30, 2006

Miserable Thought Comments

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Gloomy kind of feelings
suddenly came....
lingering into my mind
darkening my today
...
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mary das
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Marvin Brato 15 October 2007

Maybe you hate yourself for loving the person, the reason why the thought of him cannot get out from your mind! What can you do if he is not you type yet your heart crave for him. Or, he may have done you wronged yet you still long for him. True love it is! Thanks for sharing, top mark.

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Brian Dorn 09 December 2006

This poem certainly evokes strong negative feelings, though leaving it a mystery as to why? Whatever the case, certainly just the thought of this person is enough to ruin the day. Well done, Mary! Brian

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Rajaram Ramachandran 31 October 2006

This sounds like infatuation on the spur of a moment. This kind of love and hate style is present almost in every woman.

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