Friday, January 3, 2003

Mischief Comments

Rating: 3.0

Let those who're fond of idle tricks,
Of throwing stones, and hurling bricks,
And all that sort of fun,
Now hear a tale of idle Jim,
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Jane Taylor
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Well penned every mischief has a penalty awaiting for it

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Chinedu Dike 17 May 2022

Nicely crafted in verse with beautiful rhyme scheme....

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Bri Edwards 17 May 2022

Overall, I give this poem five stars for its rhyming, humour/humor, and flow. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 17 May 2022

Of course, though called my son, he'd probably have been the son of our neighbor Bill, of whom I think my wife had had her fill.

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Bri Edwards 17 May 2022

If he'd been my son, that Idle Jim, I'd tan his bottom, or, better still, I might throttle him.

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Bri Edwards 17 May 2022

Oops! I'll give this poet allowance for some English structure I would change a bit, since she grew up in England and many years ago so must have been proper for her times. ;) bri

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Dwip Sarkar 17 May 2022

Nice

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 May 2022

2) we can read the unpleasant experiences from her time, as punishment a few days in a country jail. Excellent end rhymes.5 Stars full

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 May 2022

Display of mischief? how softly said, it is misbehaving and bullying neighbours, not giving people good information to continue on their way in this poem by Jane Taylor

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M N 31 March 2009

lamentation loll Dian lame

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Jane Taylor

Jane Taylor

Colchester, England
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