Sunday, April 25, 2010

Miscarriage - You Came Too Soon Comments

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Miscarriage - You came too soon:

With so much love we you did form
Our passion stronger than a summer storm
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Vaughn Bekker
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Louis Rams 24 May 2010

this child lived inside your womb, and may have been taken much too soon, but the lord had a reason for this. and all that he does, maybe he saw that this child needed much more love. but whatever the reason for his decision, it makes you stronger as a person. excellent write and topic

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this poem almost made me cry...i love it it has a great purpose...just absolutely wonderful...

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Olivia Helmes 13 May 2010

This has an amzing flow and choice of words. Great poem.

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Crimson Haze 08 May 2010

Wow that was really good. And I am sorry for your lost no matter how long ago it was. One of my good friends just lost her child and so I can only imagine how much it many hurt.

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Andrew Evans 06 May 2010

whoa that was way better then anything I wrote

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