Misbehaving Mouse In Our House... [bri Edwards] Comments
A warning goes out now to all outdoor mice:
'Before you enter THIS house, you'd best think twice! '
Last week, after I'd 'taken a shit', I saw a mouse!
It looked at ME, &.........I looked at IT.
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Sorry for the Mouse.But it is no fault of yours if it died when you were trying to drive it away.
Mouses cause lot of nuisance if they enter the house.It is irritating if they cut your valuable dress or books.But my hands stop if I am going to kill the little creature out of rage.I wish they never enter or leave on their own.
UES, I did not know I used allegory (symbolism) ! The poem is literally true, not meant to be symbolic. PERHAPS YOU MEANT 'all gory'? ? bri ;) Thanks, thouigh, for your comment.
And what if mouse claims it is his home and you are intruder? ? ?
A very good question! I'd thought of it and here is my answer: 'I'd immediately move out and help the mouse to get settled in ITS new home! ! bri : )
O ho! Bri! This is so sad! Why did you kill the mouse? You should have let it go! Sad poem!
Speak to my wife! Much is sad in life/death. Did you think I'd want to share my ice cream with it? ? Stay up on those toes! ! bri ;)
Ok, ok, next time I'll catch it and send it [[ ALIVE ]] to you, Twinkle Toes aka Geeta, to India. Feel better NOW? ? ? ? bri
Hey, someone recently wrote that you'd not been around in a while. Perhaps my poem stirred you up, not like coffee? bri ;)
I want to edit it even more, but I don't find/remember how to do it. : ( bri
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7/25/2025 6:44:41 PM # 1.0.0
Readers, If I were to die, some people would most likely refer to me as 'the late Bri Edwards' (or 'the late Brian Edward Whitaker [my real name]) . : )