She says I'm sick.
She better watch her tongue
Or I'll nail it to the table,
She'll have to bite it o
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Love it! ! Nice and dark. deliciously dark. A superbly written poem that oozes menace and deep rooted hatred. And they are so hard to write to get into that frame of mind. Well done Bryony a psychologic tour de force. So many gripping and outstanding lines... " A black cat bitten by its own black luck." 10++ and added to my dark vault for a gone midnight reading. Thanks again and take care.
Enjoyed this amazing poem, well worded. A full 10 score and much much more! Keep on creating, Bryony!