Friday, December 20, 2019

Misanthropic Comments

Rating: 5.0

She says I'm sick.
She better watch her tongue
Or I'll nail it to the table,
She'll have to bite it o
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Bryony Sheldon
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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 December 2019

Enjoyed this amazing poem, well worded. A full 10 score and much much more! Keep on creating, Bryony!

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Shaun Cronick 20 December 2019

Love it! ! Nice and dark. deliciously dark. A superbly written poem that oozes menace and deep rooted hatred. And they are so hard to write to get into that frame of mind. Well done Bryony a psychologic tour de force. So many gripping and outstanding lines... " A black cat bitten by its own black luck." 10++ and added to my dark vault for a gone midnight reading. Thanks again and take care.

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