I see you looking back at me
With absolute disgrace
You don't even blink an eye
Just a blank stare on your face
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Nice flow and rhymes. How about a 9? Hmm.. on further reflection, definitely a 10. - chuck
Looking in the mirror our views often change. If life is shining our eyes are sparkling and we see beauty. If struggling we see pain that shows no beauty. Lovely to read your work. I wish you well.