Tuesday, January 31, 2006

Mirrors Don'T Lie Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see you looking back at me
With absolute disgrace
You don't even blink an eye
Just a blank stare on your face
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Denise Clark
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Lyn Paul 10 April 2018

Looking in the mirror our views often change. If life is shining our eyes are sparkling and we see beauty. If struggling we see pain that shows no beauty. Lovely to read your work. I wish you well.

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Shannon Chapel 01 February 2006

Nice one. I agree with Chuck.; -) Shannon

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Chuck Audette 31 January 2006

Nice flow and rhymes. How about a 9? Hmm.. on further reflection, definitely a 10. - chuck

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Denise Clark

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