Wednesday, April 3, 2024

Mirror's Cruel Gaze Comments

Rating: 4.7

I come to a room adorned with whispers of time,
Where the shadows dance in a rhythmic rhyme,
And there, an old woman stands with a heavy heart,
Gazing into a mirror, looking at the crooked work of art.
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Marguerite Anderson
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Femi Ogunlude 27 April 2024

The crooked work of art i.e the old woman represents the lost Grace of youthfulness. However, not taking in that reality she feels still young and beautiful at heart and above all undeniable that comes with age. A lovely contemplative poem

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Dr PJ Raj Kamal 27 April 2024

Excellent poem. Thanks for sharing. A very bright thinking about the reality. Congrats

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Tyler Cobb 26 April 2024

That's a great description of how it feels to look at yourself and see how the troubles of life have turned your self image! This poem deserves to be shared all over!

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Sandra Feldman 26 April 2024

Wow1 what a POEM! ! ! Only Poetry can put together this deep, deep geometry, .with such art and insight, that these words and feelings, will Never, never fall apart

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