Thursday, October 8, 2020

Mirrors And Mirages Comments

Rating: 4.5

Try harder to accommodate the good in me
Focus less on weaknesses
Gaze at success thicknesses
Blessings aplenty to you will flow in a sea
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John Sensele
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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 October 2020

A well authored poem. Truly excellent and fabulous..5 stars*****

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Khairul Ahsan 09 October 2020

'From head to toe When your ire sets on fire Burning vestiges of ire you fail retire As long as you heap blame on my humble hoe' - Loved this last stanza, so beautiful!

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Ndola, Zambia
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