Thursday, September 29, 2016

Mirrored Beings Comments

Rating: 5.0

‘…You have lion's eyes…
You have a glow…'

I have found the dwelling of my spirit:
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 November 2018

The lie of whatever my reality was made of — The imaginary walls I have build around me all my life— And you have found me, and intrude into my dwelling: In searching for Yourself........nice flow. Beautifully penned. Tfs.

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M Asim Nehal 04 October 2016

The storyline and the flow both took it to a different level altogether, you made the love for soulmate immortal and the obsession with balanced mind took it to the heights of infinity....Loved it MP....10+++

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Rajesh Thankappan 03 October 2016

Love with its magic wand performs great trick beckoning one into realms untrodden and thus the hesitation to embark and embrace it. Wonderful write.

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Hazel Durham 03 October 2016

Outstanding write, I can relate to the finding of oneself in another and feeling obsessive about your lover but fear of seeing oneself makes you want to run away. A deep, intense and outstanding write!

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