Saturday, May 5, 2007

Mirror Reflection Comments

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The sun starts fading
another day has passed by
She looks up at the blue sky
and thinks of the sunlight that can tell no lie
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Old Teenage Poems
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James Foulk 01 August 2007

you have a way of putting words in the right order. a well penned piece of work.

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Amanda Saveley 30 July 2007

She looks up at the blue sky and thinks of the sunlight that can tell no lie... So perfect...loving those lines...

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